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Title: On A Day Like This
Author: TeeJay
[livejournal.com profile] whitecollar100 Prompt: #32 Chocolate
Genre: Gen
Characters/Pairings: Neal, Elizabeth
Word Count: 300
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Spoilers for 2x09 'Point Blank' and 2x10 'Burke's Seven'
Summary: Time has no meaning when Neal is sitting by Mozzie's hospital bed.
Author's Note: Two words: Neal!Angst.
Disclaimer: White Collar, its characters and its settings belong to Jeff Eastin and USA Network. And, guys? Your characters are not only welcome, they're wonderful. I'm just borrowing, I promise.
 
 
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Time has no meaning when Neal is sitting by Mozzie's hospital bed. He's seen every shade of daylight—or absence of it—in this room. The light outside may change, but the sound never does. The monotonous beeping has become a pacemaker in Neal's existence.

This is one of those days where it is increasingly difficult to persevere against life and its encumbrances. Neal has brought a book but doesn't try to read it. He knows that's not good, because it inevitably leads to guilt and anger and too vivid, gruesome images in his mind.

Days like this always end in too much red wine, fitful (and too little) sleep and a headache the next day.

His back turned to the door, he doesn't look up when he hears footsteps approaching. Probably just the nurse, checking the pulse ox clip. Or the IV. Or the catheter bag. They all know Neal. And they know what it's like and why he's here. They know not to ask questions.

The gentle touch on his shoulder startles him and the soft voice that speaks his name instantly soothes his troubled soul.

"I got this for you," Elizabeth says, stepping around the chair. She holds out a paper cup to him that he accepts without question. It is hot to the touch.

The white plastic lid prevents him from gauging the content. He is surprised when it's sweet and milky on his tongue rather than pleasantly bitter.

"Hot chocolate?" he asks.

"Neal, you're burning yourself out. You can't live on caffeine and potato chips."

She takes the free chair next to him.

"Any change?" she asks, and he knows she's not going anywhere for a while. It gives him a feeling of relief and comfort—something he desperately needs on a day like this.

Date: 2011-02-11 05:58 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ladygray99
This is wonderful. The image of Elizabeth trying to quietly help Neal while he's in that state is a lovely one.

Date: 2011-02-11 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tj-teejay.livejournal.com
Thanks. Though I feel kinda guilty for taking such a sweet, enjoyable prompt like chocolate and turn it into a rather depressing, angsty piece like this.

Date: 2011-02-11 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sg-lab.livejournal.com
This was very sweet.

Date: 2011-02-11 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tj-teejay.livejournal.com
Thank you. :o)

Date: 2011-02-14 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com
Very sweet! That is so Elizabeth to do that. Excellent characterization and I love any hints of Neal/Mozzie.

Date: 2011-02-14 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tj-teejay.livejournal.com
So glad you like it. Thanks for the comment. And, uhm, Neal/Mozzie? As in slash? I must admit, I find that even harder to fathom than Neal/Peter. But then again, I've never been a non-canon slash gal... :o)

Date: 2011-02-14 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com
It takes a pretty special slash-glasses prescription, but I totally see it.

Date: 2011-03-05 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afiawri.livejournal.com
I like the tiny moments of surprise here - Elizabeth, then the hot chocolate - and how we see how much more burned out Neal is.

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